Amanda Rabade

Tuesday 2/13 (Class 11)

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Mentor Feedback:

• No point of interest in SH010
• Enhancethe transition from SH010 to SH020
  • Do a crash zoom
  • Too jarring as is
  • Last frame should be all blue (to match the cooler) for a solid transition
• More DOF
• SH040 is too busy
  • Too many highlights
  • Cans too dark
  • Get sharper reflections
  • Peep reflections in cans
  • Pyro too dense
  • establish depth with Peeps
  • Peeps need more dimension (too flat)
• Possibly add condensation on cans/ice/inside of cooler
• Add motion blur
• More separation between Peeps and can in SH050 (can should stand out more)
  • Letters on can should be legible
• Use proxy geo to create shadow on Peeps in SH050

Professor Feedback:

• Buy Pepsi can and Peeps for shader reference
• Shots need to be isolated to one artist (too many cooks in the kitchen)
• Get more slap comps done
• Layout needs to be finalized ASAP
• Pyro and Peeps need to be lit better in SH040
• Live action shots need to look more cohesive with rest of ad.
• SH040 stands out too much (update lighting and shaders to match previous shots)

Thursday 2/15 (Class 12)

I worked on lighting the ice in SH030 more appropriaely so there’s continuity from the previous shot and going into the next one. We got a lot of feedback on the Pepsi can in this shot being too washed out so I adjusted the lighting and shader to be more accurate.

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Professor Feedback:

• Get pipeline working
  • Need clear naming convention
  • Everyone needs to be clear on what they are working on
  • No more confusion with assembly cuts (not having the most up to date versions of shots)
• Shaders need to be updated in all shots fro consistency
• Adjust Peep animation in SH010
• Too many filler assets in SH010 (taking away focus from cooler)