Tuesday 3/5 (Class 17)
The mentors came to visit Savannah! It was such a wonderful experience to meet everyone and get to speak on them one on one. I had a group portfolio review with the mentors on Monday and received lots of valuable feedback on my demo reel.
Mentor Feedback:
- Fix lighting direction in SH010 (light should be coming from top left corner)
- Can shadows on ice box are too hot
- Fix dark edges on tubes and cooler in SH010
- Add extra fill light to SH010
- Get ground reflections on cans in SH010
- Use hue suppress node in Nuke to reduce green screen spill on ice box
- Use AO for contact shadows and render a specular pass
- Push the Peep pattern more on live action backgrounds
- Add some texture to it to add believability
- Match DOF
- Add motion blur to confetti
- Make confetti sliver
- Finesse 3D edges in all 3D shots
- All shots are overexposed
- Get some midtones
- Try to get 3 different levels of lighting
- Push DOF in all shots
- Play with idea of macro world
- Ice is too sharp (needs to be blurred)
- Add bokeh to ice in background of shots
- Change rim direction on blue peeps in SH020
- Use 1 light setup for everything
- Screen right tubes in SH020 aren’t sharp enough
- Lower IOR of tubes
- Concrete of diving board should be solid (remove gradient)
- Bring confetti to SH020
- Fix clamping issue
- Darken lighting
- Blur SH040 ice more and brighten
- Match SH050 black levels of 3D elements to live plate
- Blur cooler edges
- Add motion blur to logo on lid
- Stop overthinking comp
- Update tube material from SH020 in all shots
- Get sky HDRI
- Add grain at the end of shots
Thursday 3/7 (Class 18)
Based off of the mentors feedback, I re-worked our schedule by shot so we could work on as much as we could before our final deadline for Week 10.






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